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“Mom, when can I go play my computer?” Dakota
shouted down the stairs at her mom.
“When you learn how to do your homework!” Dakota’s
mother Tammy said in a serious voice.
Dakota Patriel is a 13 year old girl who goes to school
at Husky M. Middle School. Dakota has trouble paying
attention in school and her grades are very low. Most of
the time she just wants to be at home playing games.
“Dakota will you watch Beau while I go to the store?”
“Sure if he behaves.” Dakota yelled from her room.
Of course like always she was playing her video games.
Her little brother who is 7 always annoys her but she has
to deal with him anyways.
“You’re the worst babysitter ever.” Beau said as he sat
on Dakota’s bed throwing her action figures on the ground.
“Well you are the biggest brat ever so I guess we both
have problems.” Dakota said like she didn’t care at all.
All of the sudden Dakota stood up, slammed her
hands on the keyboard and screamed “Dang it! I swear
this guy is cheating he beats me everytime!”
“Maybe you’re just not as great as you think you are!”
Beau screamed as if he took her actions personally.
Dakota started talking to her dog Bruiser after Beau
stormed off. “Hey Bruiser do you think he is mad at me?”
“Roof Roof Roof!” Bruiser barked loudly. Dakota
walked over to her computer, she turned it on, typed in her
password and saw that she had a message. She thought
in her head, Who would send me a message I have no
friends. GameCheater559 that is who the message came
from. Then she remembered that is the person who had
beat her a couple minutes ago. The message read,
Dear Gamer38, You don’t know who I am but
tomorrow me and all the other gamers on Mixen are
having a Game Reenactment on the empty lot off Meadow
Pine Drive at 4:30 this Saturday. You are invited but you
have to be the Girl warrior, Elemina The Great, if you want
to battle all the other players and try to win the Golden
Mixen Helmet. But of course you can’t beat me but I
challenge you to try.
“Should I go Bruiser? I don’t know this guy he might
be a psycho for all we know. Or he could just be a selfish
gamer who thinks he’s better than everyone else. I’ll just
“ Mom are you home yet?” Dakota yelled to the
“Yeah I’m in the kitchen cooking the spaghetti.”
Dakota’s mother shouted from the kitchen.
Dakota ran downstairs into the kitchen. “Hey mom
can I go to a game reenactment tomorrow at the empty lot
down the street?”
“I will have to come with you but sure.”
Dakota ran back upstairs to her room and typed back,
I accept your challenge only if I can be the Great
Warrior Eloise of the Forest. But I would like to bring four
people for other characters on my team. They will be The
King of the Great Slug Palace, The Queen of the Insect
Cave, The Legend Warrior of Herrencia, and lastly The
Weapon Keeper of the Game. I will be there no matter
what you say and I will battle in the reenactment so watch
your back because I am not a friendly person.
I tried to act confident and scary but I’m terrified.
What if I get there and this guy is amazing! I can’t beat
him! He knows every map and skill in the game!
Right away Dakota started getting costumes ready
and inviting her 4 guests. Jackie, Joey, Tommy, and
Amber. Dakota’s costume was an old, cut up purple shirt
that she wrapped around different pieces of cardboard for
her violet armor. She wore hiker boots for her shoes and
used an old plastic sword that her brother used to play
with when he was little. For Joey’s slug costume, she
would give him rubber dish gloves covered in dish soap
like slime, a cape and king crown from her brother, along
with a pair of boots. Amber would be the weapon keeper
of the game so she would have a wizard robe, cool gloves
and a headband with a gem on it. For Tommy, The
Legend Warrior of Herrencia, he will have the golden
sword which of course was plastic, diamond armor, and a
mask. Jackie is the Queen of The Insect Cave so she will
have fake wings, a headband with “antennae” on it, and a
I would love to come to your reenactment. I
bet it will be very fun. Tommy, Joey, and Jackie would love
to come, too. They want to meet at your house at 3:00
I am so worried only 3 hours until the battle. At least I
have extra people on my team besides Tommy, Jackie,
Joey, and Amber. What if they quit because it’s too
boring? They wouldn’t… or would they? I know they love
games but what if they only like playing them not acting
Oh they’re here early. “Mom can you get the door
please?” Dakota yelled.
“Sure. It’s your friends Dakota.” her Mother yelled
with question in her voice.
Dakota ran down stairs as fast as a lightning bolt.
“Hey guys! Are you ready?” Dakota asked them excitedly.
“Yeah, we came early to see if you wanted to go to
the sandwich shop across the lot for lunch.” Tommy said.
“Of course. Let me go ask my mom.” Dakota walked
into the living room and asked her mother, “Can we go to
Eddie’s Sandwich Shop across the lot where we are
having the reenactment?”
“Yep I will be ready in about 5 minutes.” Her mother said.
Dakota and her friends brought their costumes
and slipped them on over their clothes of course her
mother didn’t want to wear a costume. Then they
walked down the street and walked into Eddie’s
They talked about what they wanted and agreed
on the same thing. Joey walked up to the counter
and asked the lady, “Can we get 6 ham and cheese
sandwiches with mayo, lettuce, pickles, 2 bags of
barbecue chips, 3 bags of potato chips, and 6
fountain drinks please.”
“That will be $33.54,” the lady said in the kindest voice.
Joey put a 20, a 10, 3 ones, 2 quarters and 4
pennies on the counter. Then he put $4 in the animal
They sat at a table and ate their sandwiches. Once
they were finished they walked across the street and
There he was, GameCheater559. Dakota was ready
to claim her flag and win the prize. The rest of her team
arrived and they all lined up and stared at the person
across from them on the other team like angry bulls.
Everything was slow motion in Dakota’s head, the words
of someone yelling, “Ready! Set! Fight!” All of the sudden
Dakota was charging full speed at GameCheater559! She
had to win!
She watched her teammates get hit and walk over
and sit on the bench. But she also saw her teammates hit
the other teams players. All of the sudden everything
turned silent when a loud scream was heard and the
words “Time Out” were yelled. It was Amber. Someone
kicked her in the ankle. “It hurts really bad!” Amber yelled in pain.
Dakota walked the limping warrior over to the bench
and one of the teammates that was out handed Amber his
ice pack. “Are you going to be okay Amber?” Dakota
asked her hurt friend.
“Yeah I’ll be fine but I can’t play anymore,” Amber
said in a hurt tone.
Dakota thought for a while, if Amber couldn’t fight
then they didn’t have enough people to battle. Then she
got an idea. She ran over to the bench and yelled, “Mom
can you play?” Dakota pleaded with her mom
“I would but I don’t know how!”
“Just run towards the Golden Mixen Helmet and don’t
let anyone tag you,” Dakota told her mom.
“ Do you forfeit?” yelled GameCheater559 with a
“No, my mom will take place for Amber, I mean
Weapon Keeper of the game,” Dakota said.
“Then on with the game!” GameCheater559 commanded.
Everybody ran at each other. Nobody really knowing if
they were close to the prize. Then all of the sudden a girl
dressed as one of the stealth ninjas crept up behind me
and I watched her strawberry red braids fly up as she
jumped and hit me with her fake sword. At that second I
realized that I was out. Surprisingly my mom was only
guarded by two stealth ninjas and a bug master but luckily
Tommy, Jackie, and Joey were right behind her. They
jumped up and surprised the enemy and my mom snuck
right through and grabbed the Mixen Helmet! We had
won! I couldn’t believe it. We left not wanting to brag but
we walked to the ice cream shop knowing that we won the
“She is Fighter”
They didn’t know who she was. They didn’t know where she came from. She just was there now. They accepted that. But did they like it? Good question. Though she was kind and respectful, there were mixed feelings about this stranger. The village leader would find himself blushing when she asked him a question and was at a loss for words when he tried to speak to her. The blacksmith didn’t trust her, though he was usually a kind man. The villagers would grumble around the table with their family. She didn’t do any work, but they labored all day in the fields, shops, at the lake, or in the forest. As this continued, more resentment grew toward the kind stranger, as peaceful as she seemed. The village leader grew anxious. They were a peaceful village, but she had set them off center. Many said she must work for food. The village leader hated to demand the stranger to work, but he had to. If she would work, the village would be balanced again. So, he politely explained. She smiled and laughed and assured him that things would turn out fine, that she would work and the village could be at peace. He flushed a bit as she said this and couldn’t help but think of how nice she looked. But as a couple of days passed, he wasn’t sure she would keep that promise. She spent her hours roaming around the village edge, eyes always on the horizon. She always held two sticks, one in each hand. Any small movement would draw her attention, and any noise would cause her to rush to suddenly stand erect, as if she had been electrocuted. It was like she was waiting for something. Then they came. The village cried out in fear as they raced into their homes, running from the stinking flesh and incoherent moans. There was little light that rainy day, except for a few streetlamps. And even they seemed gloomy and strange. As they gathered safely together they remembered that she was still outside. The town leader rushed to the door to pull the her inside. But there, at the door, he beheld an amazing sight. She was outside, drenched with a mix of sweat and rain. She held two sticks, one in each hand. She punched and kicked and swung at the molten green creatures. And by the time the rain was stopping, she had defeated all but one. But the fatigue was too much. Every little scrape worked against her as she struggled to stay alive. She was losing health quickly, and with one unexpected blow from the creature, she was gone. Two sticks on the ground were the only remnants of her heroism. Two sticks and many glowing orbs. The village leader roared in fury and pain, prepared to pummel the last strange creature for what it had done. It only took one hit to destroy it. And then the rain stopped, the sun shone, the village emerged from hiding. “Fighter,” they said after hearing the story. They savored the word, which meant so many things. “She is Fighter”
Hope you liked it!
May B. was just a normal girl on the farm. Of course since she was a girl
she couldn’t help out, but that was about to change, all because of her.
Although I have to say it doesn’t happen very easily especially since she
couldn’t help on the farm, only boys like her brother could help. She has to
go to school instead, but she was having trouble so her parents sent her to
a teacher who could help her. The catch was she would have to move to
New York. She had to move to a whole different state.
As my mom leaves all I can think to say is… that’s it nothing. All I
could think to do was run, so that’s just what I did. I ran. I ran as fast as I
could, not even thinking about food, or water, or survival. When I woke up I
found myself in a ditch with an old man sitting next to me. He started
moving closer, so I ran and I only paused for a moment when I tripped on a
root of a tree. Then he asked me, “ Why are you scared of me?”
“Well, you only come out at night. It’s kind of scary.”
“I don’t like to see a lot of people, and I don’t think people like to see
a lot of me.”
“Maybe you’re wrong.”
“No, no I’m not wrong.”
“ What happened that you think that no one wants to see you?”
“In 1991 there was a break in. Have you ever heard about Johnny
Bond death? He was my son during a break in, he and my wife were
brutally murdered.”The girl shivers as if she is cold, but they both knew it
Early that morning May heard foot steps outside of the tent, so she took
the bat she so happened to have in her bag, and walked outside to see the
old man sitting by the fire.
“Sorry if I woke you.”
“How did you build the fire in the rain?”
“I found a old sheet and hung it in the trees.”The girl nodded her head
thinking that if they could find a sheet what else could they find.
“I’m gonna go for a walk.”As she strugled in the mud on the bottom
of the creek she doesn’t notice that someone or something as in the tree,
but she was getting tired so May decided to take a break/zzz.When May
wakes up to find that a pile of wood and bricks right by her side in a little
red wagon she yanks the wagon with all her might then jumps on to fall with
the wagon down the hill.
“COMING IN HOT!!”Mary yelled as she hit the fire with a loud BANG,
“why are you looking at the fire?”She figured he would be very mad if she
told him so she thought it all ended out fine so why should I tell him.The
next day Mary found out why she should have told him.
“Hello who’s there?”Mary asked once again holding her bat in her
“I’m who you called the old man’s wife and this is his son Johnny.”
“That’s not possible his wife and son are dead.”
“We needed him to think that the cops thought that he was a
murderer but I didn’t know how to tell him I faked me and my son’s death
and we just now found out that he wasn’t.”
“Chris can you come here?” Mary murmurs so the old man walked
out she could tell that he was surprised to see them standing there.
“I thought you were dead.”
“I know I needed you to think that the police thought that you were a
WELCOME TO YOUR GRAVE
There was a brave kid named Dipper
Sanborn. Dipper was 10 years old and
loved to play hockey and was a naughty
boy at his house. But the most thing he
loved was that he was great at drawing
and loved to play pretend. A lot of the
girls were in love with him. He had black
hair and brown eyes. One day people
were picking on a 5 year old boy and
Dipper beat them and got sent to juvie
for beating up kids.
5 months later he when he got out of
juvie somebody went over to the prison
“HELP! HELP! SOME WEIRD THING IS
IN MY ROOM! GET IT OUT!” So Dipper
was just about to go when, BOOM! Out
of the explosion came a ghost, not just
a ghost a pirate ghost, One Eyed Willy (
Look on the last page to see Willy)
“What the heck was that!” yelled
somebody. Everybody was running
away……. Besides Dipper. He was
going to beat Willy then be FAMOUS!!!!
Here we go. PUNCH! KICK! Willy was
done for and Dipper was a hero.
“In 80 years I will return!” screamed
Willy. So the end was near… for Dipper.
To be continued in Welcome to your
grave Willy’s Warning.
The year is 3099,once there were
two little elves, named Polly and
Isabelle. They were both good little
elves that wrapped all of their daily
presents and sometimes even wrapped
other elves daily presents. One dark
stormy day in Santa’s workshop, it was
8:45 AM. Everything seemed normal,
but with one elf she felt like she was
very hungry, but then she went a little
crazy. She broke all the kids toys.
None of them could be repaired…
“Santa? Where am I?” asked Polly.
“You are in the elf hospital in central
North Pole. We just found out that you
have the North Pole sugar rush Polly!”
How’d I get that? Polly thought to
“Oh no! The Snowman of the South
is coming! Isabell where are you? I
hope you are out fighting the Evil
Snowman of the South Pole” screamed
Polly called Santa on her elf phone to
ask if she could fight against the evil
snowman of the South Pole.
Santa responded as, “If you will be
Polly took her medicine that cured
her right away. It was called
“I’ll be out there in a jiffy!” Polly cried.
Polly ran through the workshop as if
there was a tornado in there with her
running over a bunch of elves. Soon
she arrived in Central Square…
It was a bright sunny day for Polly,
but it was a dark stormy day for the
Snowman of the South.
“How is your day going?”asked Polly
to the evil Snowman of the South Pole.
“Well I think that I am going to beat
you up!”exclaimed the evil snowman of
the south pole.
“Let us start a
The war started with a big bomb on
top of the Evil Snowman of the South
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”Isabell thought to
herself. The snowman did not get killed
by the bomb that got dropped by the
That is Santa’s secret
plane. The S stands for Santa, and the
00818 is the model number.
The North Pole won because it is one
also known as infinity, elves. After the
one thousandth bomb, that finally killed
Once all of the elves, Santa, and
Mrs. Claus went into the workshop they
all had a party for owning the North Pole
and the South Pole. Let’s do an
Battle In The Golden Palace
It was morning on a cold workday. TIber was using his hammer to get gold from
a mine for his boss to give to Yeqon.
“ How long do we have left?” he asked his slavefriend Kipper.
“About 15 hours left.” Kipper replied. Tiber and Kipper are only two of the people
who have to mine for Yeqon… There are hundreds. Only a few of Yeqon’s friends don’t
have to mine in his underground city. Plus, if you’re not a slave you’re one of Yeqon’s
“What are you two doing?” Their boss asked them.
“We’re talking,” they both replied instantly.
“Get back to work!”
After hours of working Tiber walked home. He opened his freezer and pulled out
a sandwich. He took one bite before his door swung open.
“We need you to come with us,” they said. They took him to a place with cold
cells and people. He put Tiber in one with someone with a hood on.
“Um, hello,” Tiber said.
“Do you have anything with you?”
“What is it?”
Tiber pulled out his sandwich and his hammer. The person grabbed the hammer
and started smacking the cage wildly. Tiber took a bite of his sandwich and then threw it
out the cage. In a few moments the cage was open and the person ran out.
“Are you coming?” the person who now took off their hood. It was a girl with
bright red hair. She grabbed some of the weapons from the rack.
“Come on we have to defeat Yeqon!” Tiber jumped out and grabbed a knife.
They then started for Yeqon’s golden castle. As they walked, the shadows slowly crept
up the streets of the city.
“Let’s wait here,” she said quietly.”It’ll be easier to travel in the dark, there’s less
guards out then.”
They waited till 12:00 when only a few guards were left in the dark of the night.
They walked quickly to the entrance of the golden palace. Suddenly the door opened
and a few of Yeqon’s guards ran out with swords and armor. Kling! Kling! Klang! Ow!
The girl stabbed them and threw them in a river with crocodiles and alligators.
“Just so you know, my name is Linna.”
“Ok, mines Tiber,” he replied.
They walked through the long hallway of Yeqon’s Golden castle. When they got
to the throne room they were instantly attacked by some guards. Linna got beat and
was taken somewhere.
“Go get that guy.” Yeqon said to a person in another room. A person walked in
and replied,” Ok sir.”
I know that voice, Tiber thought. That’s Kipper.
“Kipper,” Tiber yelled.
“Shut up!” Yeqon said, glaring at Kipper. His face was as red as a big plump
tomato. Tiber walked up to Yeqon.
“You need to stop!” Tiber yelled, slowly Kipper walking toward Tiber. He
suddenly grabbed Tiber and two guards helped him.
“Why’d you do that?” Tiber asked Kipper.
“ Cause Yeqon will torture me if I don’t.” the guards carried him the same way
they carried Linna. When they stopped there was a boiler where they boil the gold into
“Any last words.” the guards asked him.
“Yes and they are…” before he could say anything they pushed him in…
It felt like he was falling for years but just before he hit the boiling gold a big rock
from a slingshot slammed into him and he landed on a ledge.
When he woke up Kipper was standing right above him.
“I thought you were gonna turn on me!” Tiber said to Kipper.
“I realized that I could just run cause he’s a fat slug who always sits.”
“Thanks!” Tiber said. They started running, determined to defeat Yeqon.
They didn’t care what was in their way they just killed it and ran off.
When they got to the throne room Tiber said, “We’re here to defeat you.” The air
was hot with all the steam coming out of Tiber’s ears. He had a sword in hand and was
ready to fight. Kipper had a shield and a sword and threw it at Yeqon. He screamed
when it hit his leg, blood pouring out. Then Yeqon’s number 1 guard came in. He had
one of those spiky swords.
Kipper ran at the guard and they started the fight. Tiber was sprinting at Yeqon
with his sword ready to kill him. But instead of stabbing him he started pushing his
throne towards the boiler.
Suddenly he heard a scream and it was Kipper. He had been stabbed and then
thrown in the boiler.
“Noooooooooo!” Tiber screamed. But then out of nowhere Linna ran out and
killed the guard.
“Linna, I thought you died.” Tiber said.
“No I just jumped over the boiler and they thought I died.” Linna replied.
“Well anyway, let’s go get him!” But before they left Yeqon was gone. He went
into hiding somewhere in the city.
“Man we missed him.” Linna said. They started walking out of the castle to go
somewhere to prepare for the next sneak attack.
“We’ll get you next time!”
Water Is My Protector
Book 1 of the A.D.H.D. series
Confused and Afraid
¨ Let’s take a bath,¨ my mom said as I looked at the water in the bath, and then I
felt something happening, something I might never know what it is, I felt a spark, no
ordinary spark at all, I felt a spark of the water element begin to form into my soul and
knew it was trying to tell me something. After that I knew I had to find out what the water
was trying to tell me. Only a minute later I found out a part of what it was trying to tell
me, but I didn’t find out soon enough. The water was trying to warn me of the spirit who
was trying to take control over me, the name it goes by is A.D.H.D., but before I found
out something busted the roof open and grabbed me as I was screaming for help right
before I couldn’t see anything. ¨Mom, Dad, where are you, where am I ?¨ I didn’t know
where I was or where I was going I just knew I had to escape and fast, I didn’t know
what the monster wanted or what it will do to me, so I ran.
Eventually I found a lake, I knew the best place to hide from the monster was by
water, because water is my protector. When I got there the water told me I had to build
a shelter because the monster comes out at night. I listened and quickly collected some
wood and the supplies I needed to survive the night, even though I wouldn’t be able to
tell if it is night or day because it was so dark and cold. I woke up in the morning to find
a little girl who looked just like me. The little girl looked as though she had been hiding,
just like me. The only thing going through my mind was “Should I help her, or is this a
trap?” I asked the water if I should or not, the water told me “You know the answer. Just
follow your heart.” I knew just what I should do.
Reaching out for a Friend
I started walking towards the little girl, feet trembling, heart pounding, through the dark
and scary forest. When I finally reached the little girl I was paralyzed.
“Hi,” I trembled. The girl immediately turned around and backed up.
“Please don’t hurt me,” the little girl pleaded.
“What, no I’m not going to hurt you, I just want to help,” I reassured her, knowing how
she felt. I saw the monster lurking near us. “Follow me,” I whispered. We went to the shelter I
built the night before. When I made a friend I felt something other than fear, darkness, or the
other bad things that were there. I was also wondering so many things about her at the same
time like who is she, where did she come from, and why is she here?
The Fight of the CANDIDATE
Good morning ladies and gentlemen!
Today I present to you the man of men with
big long ears, bright blue eyes, and a big fat
nose, Candidate Jeff Bobeakoo! Next we
have the 5 footone
beast, very wide with
beautiful long, luscious, dirty blond hair,
Candidate Mark YashxWak.
CANDIDATE Jeff Bobeako
“Hello, I´m Jeff Bobeako and if I’m
President I’ll build a yellow brick sidewalk. If
you want to know what it is, well, just follow
it, see what I did there? I´m just
kidding, it’s a walkway where you can walk
through Mexico under the ocean and into
China with no harm done to you. Plus you
get a great view of the life under the ocean.”
Candidate Mark YashxWak
“Hello, I’m Mark YashWak
and if I’m
president, I’ll ban hunting and release all
the wild animals in every zoo. We will just
have styrofoam sculptures of every single
animal in the universe. Well, that is if they’re
easy to build because you should know me
by now, I’m super lazy. So I just make my
servants do everything for me. All I do is go
to the bathroom, heck they even feed me.
So vote for me and not that lazy Jeff
Back at Jeff’s house
“We can’t let them know that I’m a robot.
They almost found out last night at the little
boy’s birthday party. I was
jumping in the bouncy house and suddenly
a little fat kid comes charging at me like a
bull. Then he hit me and my fake skin fell
off. And they asked me what the silver was.
I just said it was a tattoo.
Back at Mark’s house
“Go,go ,go yes goal!!!!!!Dude I’m a beast
at Fifa,” Mark says to his servant. “20
bucks says I’ll beat you in a 1v1
If I win I get 20 American buffileis, if you
win you get my whole team.”
“Deal,” the servant said. Game stats
period 1: Mark 1, servant 14.
Period 2: Mark 2, servant 28.
Period 3: Mark 3, servant 32.
Period 4: Mark 4, servant 56.
After the game, Mark said, “No we never
shook on it. You don’t get my team.”
Who do you you want to