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The battle for neverland

By:  Alyssa

 

Ch. 1 “boo’’

“SNAP”he can hear the old dusty bones break.  Jack is a boy with blond hair. he can only panic and think the worst is about to happen, and he can hear something is inching closer in the dark and shadowy wood. he doesn’t know where the shadow is coming from.

“SNAP, SNAP, SNAP.” Jack is spinning in bad thoughts, as he feels someone or something breathing on his neck.  The wind was  blowing in Jack’s hair. The light is dimming and everything is still.

“BOO!!!”

“Ahhh, i see, i see. you came back for some more.”  Jack said trembling and stuttering.

“No, not really, but since you’re here  we can talk about your brother,”  replied Xindix.  Xindix has one blind eye and the other eye is a really dark blood red color, just like his twin brother.

“Why? What did you do to him? where is he? let him go!’   Jack said  questioning Xindex quick and shaky.

 

 

 

Two days earlier….

It was a normal day. kids were outside, birds were chirping.

Until, “ beep beep beep, boom!”

“Attention candy vill! the ugly brothers xindix, and vandile are coming. get all kids, go get all kids inside.”  Peter announced, but no one would listen.

“We are serious get all kids inside, the ugly brothers are coming for all kids.” peter repeated with a bright red face.  But no one listened until it was too late. The town went into pandemonium.  “GRAB THE BABIES, RUN, HIDE THE BABIES!” there were random people grabbing random babies.

“We will win this war!” the ugly brothers shouted with all of their might.

One hour later . . .

“This  was a close one,” jack reminded them.

“If this happens one more time we will stop helping this town.” peter followed jack’s comment.

“Luckily they did not get any babies,” peter repeated.  The room went dark. “ snap crunch, ahh,” the room went silent again.

When the lights came on, The only thing that was different was instead of all adults from candy vill there was only jack, peter,  and two other town people in the room.

The lights flickered off. “ aaahhhhh, help, stop please.”

The lights flickered on, “ well, well, well, we meet again!”

Can you guess whom it was? yep, it was the ugly brothers xindex, and vindile.  Xindex has one blind eye and the other one is blood red.

Then vindile had scratches all around one eye which is pitch black, then his other eye is blood red like his brother’s.

“By how bad you lost today i thought you guys would have given up,” peter was saying to mess with their heads.

“ you wish, we will not give up until we win,” they shouted back like they were embarrassed.

“ fine, you want to go?” peter and jack shouted back without thinking.

“ yah, let’s go” the ugly brothers snapped back.

 

 

Ch.2 The Battle

Xindex asked jack and peter, “do you want me to bring back the people from the town? . . .”

“ yah, that would be nice thank you.” peter cut him off of finishing his sentence.

“ let me finish let me finish, i was going to say do you want me to bring back the town so they can watch you get destroyed?” xindex replied.

“You wish! my brother and i  will never surrender, not until we win this battle!!” jack stepped into the conversation.

All of the sudden they pulled out their swords “aaaahhhhhhh,”   they leaped into action.

“ tin, tin, tin, tin, tin,” you could her their swords hitting each other’s.

“ yawn yawn, i’m so scared someone save me i’m getting hit.” xindex barked in sarcasm.

“ ha ha so funny, but trust me you will be scared, just waight,” peter barked back in excitement.

“ sure, sure, and exactly when would that be.” Xindex walked back like a baby.                                                                                              All the sudden peter darted straight at Xendex.  Peter hit xendex right in the middle of his chest “ you’re out xendex better luck next time waa, waa, waa,”

“ your big fight was a fencing match, but where is the blood or the the pain, or the death.” jack commented in a unimpressed voice.

“There was none of that stuff it was a sudden fight, no blood or harm.”  peter replied.

“fine , but let’s go back to the town then, since there isn’t anything else to do.”

The rest of the day was boring no one was yelling or playing outside everyone was too tired, and scared to be running around outside or playing everyone was inside with all doors and windows locked.  The next day was the same, no one outside, no one playing,and all doors and windows were locked.

Even though the sun was out it was a beautiful day the next day no one was out or playing.  Luckily peter, and jack were worried about the town so they called for  a town meeting.

“ attention town we have noticed some different reaction since yesterday sorry but we promise you that the ugly brothers will not be coming again.” peter told them

“ that’s what you told us last time this happened.”  the town snapped back.

“ this time i mean it we are getting a brand new  high tech security system.”

“  Once again that’s what you told us last time.”

 

Chapter 3 – sudden death round

 

“ Give up!!!” xandex yelled!

“  AHHH, how did you get in,  I just installed a high tech security system,  ALSO NEVER THIS TOWN WILL NEVER GIVE UP WE WiLL FIGHT TILL THE END!” jack shouted back, surprised that xandex was able to get passed the security system.  By now the town was out and scared from hearing all of the yelling.

So a trembling town rebellion commented “ yes we will just don’t hurt us or our families.”  Unavoidable that the town people were behind him jack jumped.

“ go back inside your houses.” jack ordered the town.  Suddenly without thinking he said “ what do you want from this town?”

Xandex replied “ OH, nothing nothing. Well there is something I want I want your brother. He is who I want, because he is said to have the final amount of power I need to defeat you.” finally finished.

“ Never I will never give him to you he is my brother he is my only other family member that is alive!”  Jack muttered back with a single tear running down his face.  and if you don’t know Jack it is very rare for him to cry even a single tear is a lot for him to cry.

“ WA WA WA!  Well then think about this, why won’t you give for him or you.  Also i think it is a little late to mention but have fun finding your brother.” xindex yelled back in a smerky way.

“ what do you mean where did you put him?” where is he? Tell me! Did you kill him?”

 

Ch.4 “death?”

“ DID YOU KILL HIM?” jack asked rapidly in a demeaning way “ did you kill him?  TELL ME PLEASE, I’m begging you.  Please can you tell me?”
“  why ,should i do that you will kill me either way, but since you you were a good and polite little boy i’ll tell you . . . . but no i did not, well not yet anyway.

Jack snapped back “go away” So xindex did as he was told he ran into the tree of hope and dreams.  Just then jack felt dizzy.

{One hour past it was now 6:45 p.m}

He woke up at last but it was cold and dark. “BOO”

“AAAHHHH, give me my brother.” is the last words jack said till xindex got him !!!!!dead!!!!!

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