Despite its location, Dot‛s Donut Shop was about to get
famous. There were reporters from all over the world! At
that moment dot‛s shop was famous. In the first five minutes
there were 30,000,000 orders! Dot was already sweating
there was so many orders. At the end of the day they closed
at 4:00 so they could make more donuts for tomorrow. Dot
has ended his shift and is ready to go to bed. He had dreams
about so many donuts. When he woke up he was ready to sell
more donuts! First he got his cooking clothes on, Next he ate
a donut for breakfast, third he got his teeth brushed, finally
he hopped in his car. When he was driving on the street he
saw hundreds of people waiting to get donuts. He got there as
soon as he could. He ran to the kitchen and he was shocked!
“HOLY DONUT HOLES”
Dot saw no donuts ready on the counter, he was so
frustrated he almost went home. One minute later the other
workers arrived. Dot said frustrated “We need to have a
“What” I specifically said “we need to close to make
donuts for today. They started to make donuts one more
minute before Dot‛s store opened, then at that moment
customers came walking in screaming for donuts. “OH NO!”
5 minutes pasted and they were not ready! Dot was not
happy at the moment he was angry. This is not how Dot
wanted his store to be like. Dot went home and started
When Dot woke up he was in the kitchen with his baker
friends and the store was closed Dot wondered “Is this a
“No” one of the bakers said.
“What are we doing here?”
“We want to talk to you Dot.” It was still a little loud
Because the people on the streets wanted donuts. They Shut
the door and locked it so they could talk. The bakers
whispered“We’re sorry for not cooking donuts to get them
ready for tomorrow.”
“It is ok” Dot snapped. “We have some donuts to make”
Dot declared. They spread flour over the counter and made
dough in a circles. They made half with sprinkles and half with
filling. A minute later, Hungry people came like zombies. Dot
was so much happier than he was earlier.
40 years later
Dot has retired and is 80 years old now. He still knows
some of his friends. He also still eats donuts for breakfast.
When there was a Knock on the door. He was walking so slowly
they knocked 2 times when he got to the door. The door
creaked open standing there was a old baker that worked with
him. “ Come on in.” Dot whispered
“Have some Coffee and a donut.” Dot whispered.
They talked for hours and then they napped for hours.
5 hours later it was dark and cold they didn‛t know what
to do. They went outside and saw a lot of holes on the wall
they didn‛t now what was doing this. At that the house went
crumbling down. Dot and the old baker hopped in the car they
drove to the bakers old house Dot had no money. “Why do we
need to talk.” whispered dot.
“We need to go to the hospital.”
“Why?” Dot asked
“Just Because we are old.” The old baker declared.
They zoomed to the hospital and got into the last two
rooms. They could talk through the wall. The doctor came in
and said “The scanner said that they were fine so they got out
of the hospital quickly. They didn‛t know what to do
1 year later
Dot has been in the hospital his room had donut
wallpaper Dot was not feeling so good at the moment. The
window was open he could smell the donuts being made. Then
there was the smell of smoke and sirens and heat. Dot was
choking because of the smoke. The doctors rushed in to grab
the patients from the rooms and loaded them into the
ambulance. They zoomed off and the whole hospital came
down there was so much dust from the ruble. Everybody was
shocked they didn‛t know what then somebody had an idea.
30 minutes later
They were driving to Omaha to get in a hotel near a
BUSY highway. It was super loud. They needed to get some
It was 5:00 and they were starving the only thing in the
fridge were old donuts from Dot‛s shop. They ate them super
fast. They were bad, But better than nothing. There were no
cars on the highway so it was quiet. They had a torn up bed
and Dot was not happy.
It was midnight and Dot was sleeping both of their
neighbors were arguing really loudly. Then at that moment
Dot busted the window and Jumped out.
Till next time!