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So, this is just an update on stories that I am working on. I just want feedback in the comments on which ones I should work on the most, or which ones sound better. Here they are:

Incursion:
An unknown force has invaded the city of New Seattle. A squad of elite users and villagers has been assigned to drop from slime block machines and clear a path for the rest of the military to take out the rest of the invading force. But will they succeed against this mighty force that they have never fought before? Each chapter has the point of view of different people.

Incite:
Gameknight is called upon to help defeat a threat that is attacking the server. He decides to use the digitizer to go into the world, but goes into another one instead. The land is a mess of stone, and looks as if for years people have been mining into it. But there is something odd about this server. It is unique, and shows real aspects of humans. “Greed, friendships, betrayal, and war. Welcome to the worst server on minecraft”.

Infestation:
An unknown contagion that causes the infected to become hostile and aggressive to others has infected a large village. The village is under quarantine and no one is allowed in or out. Gameknight has been called to examine this infection. He goes to a lab to assist, when he finds that the whole lab is being attacked by the infected. It becomes clear that this is part of something bigger than just a virus. In fact the virus is just 1/3000th of the bigger picture.

Illusion:
Gameknight logs onto minecraft late at night, but finds something odd and creepy about the server. All of the players are pitch black and just stare at him. He decides to go to crafter’s village, where he finds nothing. He runs to where the village was and the screen says: Generating Terrain. The world immediately turns into a flat world, with neon green grass and cobblestone underneath. His hotbar is gone, so is everything else in his screen. But something in the real world has changed too. Something that would make any human being question reality itself.

So, which one of these sound better? Should I change some? If so, how? Type your feedback in the comments.

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