The Surrounded Pike
By Kai Kohles
Chapter One – Kidnapped
10:38 A.M Lake Michigan
The Northern Pike was born like no other fish. His name was Joe. He had black hair and brown eyes with a nice shaped body with purple spots clothes. One day a huge storm rolled in by the southern portion of Lake Michigan. It was violent!
A moment later a tiny rock fell out of the cloud and landed in the water. Then Joe saw it and rushed over to check it out. He shredded it apart with his sharp teeth and 7 Piranhas came out. None of the other fish knew what happened. The fierce Piranhas chased Joe. He ran away, but when he tried to get away the Piranhas swam over to Mr. Catfish’s house. Suddenly, it blew up. Boom, crash!!!!
Suddenly Joe rushed over to see. if Mr. Catfish was okay, but he wasn’t! He was dying and Joe’s mom and dad rushed out to see if they could help Mr. Catfish. They brought him to the ER and they said he would be okay.
I walked to the ER to see if my friend, Mr. Catfish was feeling better. When I walked in, I saw 8 piranhas. They chased me, so I rushed to the doors but couldn’t get there. They grabbed my foot and Bonk…………….
“Wait what happened,” I said.
“Ha Ha Ha Ha, I am Mr. Parana and I am in charge of you now, little boy”……………
Chapter Two – Escape
Joe woke up and was in a small room with a cot, a toilet, and a sink. He wasn’t feeling himself and he felt like he had butterflies in his stomach. Suddenly this massive 50-pound Parana came to the small pike and he said, “Who is this guy?”
Joe was so frightened that he ran to the corner and passed out for more than an hour. When he woke up, he was gone. This was Joe’s time to escape. He grabbed a large chair and banged it on the wall. Suddenly, it cracked and cracked until the old jail cell broke open.
He looked out and the whole town was a disaster. There were piranhas everywhere and they all saw Joe and I took off after him. When he got back to the jail cell and hid in the tiny locked room and he realized he was surrounded by schools and schools of this invasive species. They were just obeying this mighty Parana. He was huge, and so if Joe wanted to save the world he would have to kill him. Then all of the other piranhas will die, so hopefully, it will work.
Chapter 3 – Attack
Joe would never have thought he would get into a bloody battle like this one but it will happen, so here Joe heads. He headed to a place right behind him and he had a bunch of guards. He thought to myself, it is going to be hard to turn his switch off the back of his head. If there is any hope of doing this Joe needed his brother so if joe gets killed there is still hope that he will turn the switch off and rebuild the kingdom so here Joe went.
Joe felt weird, probably because it was really doing this and he didn’t want to fail everyone in this lake. Anyway, Joe’s little brother still had a chance to turn it off if he doesn’t.
He silently sneaked behind the huge Piranha. He climbed up the Piranha but he saw me. He hissed to the rest of the squad of Piranhas to kill me. They all trapped him in a vault that would lose air soon so Joe thought if he could sneak out by going through the vent and go directly to the huge pike so he went and pulled the switch barely halfway down but he saw me and tore off my tail and then he threw me to the piranhas to “Sssssssquad, obliterate the sssisssssy pike and then EAT HIM!”
Joe tried and tried and tried but he couldn’t escape they put him in this little room that will lose are in a couple of hours, minutes, seconds. This is it he said but suddenly his little brother broke him out and took him underground. Joe’s brother laid him against a little bed and he fell asleep. When he woke up his brother was gone and he said next we will fight these beasts together.
Nice work!
Epic
Kai! Awesome story! I wrote a “Novel” For a writing contest and it took me a week! It was hard. And guess what? It was also about a kidnapping! 13,000 words long, but I am older than I was before. Oh well, hope you write more books!
Kai, I loved how you used vivid verbs to describe the action in your story!