This is Sean’s first story he’s ever written. He could use some suggestions about what could happen next, so please give him some ideas.
Thanks
Mark
Rocky was a scaly dark brown dragon. He was an air dragon type except he was born with a unique body. He had earth powers instead of wind powers.
One day, a great gust of wind woke Rocky up. Then he heard a “bam!” which was followed by a “whoosh!” Rocky peeked out of his cave, and he saw a fierce knight battling an air dragon. The air dragon was badly wounded and had to retreat. Rocky realized that the knight had won as he had all the equipment necessary to defeat an air dragon. The knight had slingshots, blow guns, darts, and bows and arrows. These were all long ranged weapons which the knight used to hit the air dragon in mid-air.
Rocky knew he was the air tribe’s only hope. Sweat dripped down his scaly head with fear, Rocky sprang into action. He burrowed into the ground before he suddenly burst out of the ground right beneath the knight’s feet. Without any hesitation, he sank his razor-sharp teeth into the knight’s leg. Rocky had saved the air tribe … for now.
I hope you like my chapter! Please give me some ideas for continuing the story and suggestions on my writing!
What if the knight comes back with an army? Then the dragon could learn to make friends.
Thanks for the idea! Maybe that could happen at the end. The dragon would need to pass a lot of challenges before he and knights could become friends.
Good
I suggest love
what about love
whoops practically the same comment
Oh and by the way can the dragon not be friends with the knight
uhhh… I will think about it. Thank you very much.