The 12 clans were dying 1 by 1, but not the 12th clan the sky clan ,then the sky clan and the leader tree wing flew.one sunny day tree wing and her clan flyed across a river. They Flew for 10 days to run and hunted . When it’s night sky wing sings like this, one little star on one long night can see a clan on in the open sky. “Oi! You have look out to day,” said tree wing. As one of her clan members yelled “its a pack of wolves!!’’,they took to the sky and the pack of wolves followed the sky clan and went higher and higher,seashell Luna Berch snowflake and her sister leaf rain cloud and tree wing with the scouts ran for days and weeks. after 10 years more and more clans came to be the 12 clans. now the 12th clan is the 1st clan to live for 100 years.
Ten days later…’’ tree wing.” Said a clan member, tree wing yelled “ we need look outs!’’ The look outs flew. They knew the dead of winter was coming.
Winter came the clan couldn’t fly South! What will happen next?
Nice cliffhanger! I loved your sentence structure. You have the makings of a very great author.