Herobrine found himself in a giant cave with lava flowing on either side, a user would not stand a chance. H e heard the clicks of slimes. He was happy to hear it, for slimes were his new hope, Herobrine teleported to the sound. “I am here, my friends.” He said. “Who are you?” a large slime said. “I am the living virus!” Herobrine said with an evil grin. “Master.” the slime said. “You are right.” Herobrine said, then grabbed a group of tiny slimes. He then attacked all of them at the same time. When the slimes were at the brink of destruction, the bright eyed shadow-crafter started to craft, shifted the code of Minecraft. He grabbed some bones at the corner to add extra limbs, and then he stopped crafting. A giant, crab like slime stood in front of the evil virus. ” Master… my name?” the giant slime said. “I’ll call you Craytoo.” Herobrine said, then told the other slimes, “You are to find the User-that-is-not-a-user and his army of NPCs.” And then he teleported, his evil filled eyes the last thing to fade away.
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Now that is what I call “awesome”!
I made two more stories that I hope that also get published to here; Zombie-Hunter: book one, part one, and another story.
I love this, it could be an actual story, but one thing, as soon as Craytoo was crafted dont make him (or her) immediately say “Master… my name,” you need to drag it out as if Craytoo is scared of the shadow crafter, just an opinion, good idea though!