My name is Francis, I’m 9 years old and from Los Angeles CA, I’m a big fan of your books and now on Saving Crafter. I have an idea of my own story called, “THE TEN BLAZE RODS.” I will give you a sneak peek:
It’s all about a kid(IronTrollem) who is stuck in Minecraft and is fighting a blaze king and monsters who want to end his life.
So he walked out of the portal and ran for a place to hide. “What do we do to destroy the blaze.?” asked a villager. IronTrollem was stuck, the blaze was out there his eyes flaming a bright red. In the distance probably more than a thousand blazes were in the forest. The blaze was forming a huge fire ball. “We fight.” said IronTrollem. At that moment he did something no one ever did before. He got his bow, got his sword, and he shot the sword at the monster. After that he got a diamond sword from the floor and sliced at the monster. Only then he realized it had Fire Aspect III. He then started to run but the slashes was enough fire to make the second blaze rod came off then a straight line of fire came out of him. If this were to keep up the blaze would come out of him and the entire server would be in flames and all his friends would die. “THANK YOU GOLLEM, FOR HELPING ME DESTROY THIS WORLD,” and boomed the huge blaze. At that moment he released the flaming ball at IronTrollem. He spun a blaze rod and pointed at their fortress then a million more blazes came out and started attacking. Then a creepy smile crept on his face like a spider. The blaze said,”MAY THE FIRST OF THE LAST WARS BEGIN!”
What’s up everybody? Why aren’t anybody commenting? Wish you all a Merry Christmas and a EGGcelent day;)
Nice story! I hope to hear more!
Since this was put on the website on Nov. 17th, 2016, and now it’s 2021, I assume you’re, what? 14 years old or something like that? I would hope you’ve learned a lot more about writing at this age, so I’m excited to see if you put out more!