WELCOME TO YOUR GRAVE
There was a brave kid named Dipper
Sanborn. Dipper was 10 years old and
loved to play hockey and was a naughty
boy at his house. But the most thing he
loved was that he was great at drawing
and loved to play pretend. A lot of the
girls were in love with him. He had black
hair and brown eyes. One day people
were picking on a 5 year old boy and
Dipper beat them and got sent to juvie
for beating up kids.
5 months later he when he got out of
juvie somebody went over to the prison
and yelled
“HELP! HELP! SOME WEIRD THING IS
IN MY ROOM! GET IT OUT!” So Dipper
was just about to go when, BOOM! Out
of the explosion came a ghost, not just
a ghost a pirate ghost, One Eyed Willy (
Look on the last page to see Willy)
“What the heck was that!” yelled
somebody. Everybody was running
away……. Besides Dipper. He was
going to beat Willy then be FAMOUS!!!!
Here we go. PUNCH! KICK! Willy was
done for and Dipper was a hero.
“In 80 years I will return!” screamed
Willy. So the end was near… for Dipper.
To be continued in Welcome to your
grave Willy’s Warning.
I like how the character was good and bad at the same time. I really want to find out the next one eyed willy story. I want to know because you put a great finish and made the reader want to read the next book. GREAT JOB!