By Awesomeclash11 star wars mod added
He walked up to the forest and pushed down the two levers to open the Iron door.
Awesomeclash11 and Bladeknight23 pulled out their enchanted blades and walked through the forest temple some user built.
There was a thump thump thump. “What’s that?” asked Bladeknight23 “I don’t know but it ain’t good.” replied Awesomeclash11. They marched forward to get a closer view at the jockey.
The jockey was Gameknight999. “Well hello boys.” said Gameknight999. “Hi.” replied Awesomeclash11. Soon more users came in the temple Sneakfour5, ALSkentucky1, and Enders Zheng burst into the room. “I will allow everyone to stay in this temple,” informed Gameknight.
It wasn’t long until POW!! A huge explosion rattled the room just as creepers broke through the cobblestone walls,and battle droids with blasters fired at the users
“Who added Star Wars mod?!” asked ALSkentucky1 “Me!” shouted Awesomeclash11 as he pulled his enchanted diamond sword while the other 4 crafted lightsabers.
The fight went on as the battle droids were being destroyed.
Soon all of them were destroyed. “Quick follow me.” said Gameknight999. The users followed Gameknight to a village with a cobblestone wall around it. “Where are we?” asked ALSkentucky1. “A village.” replied Gameknight999. Just as Gameknight999 opened the door the villagers were doing something very unexpected.
They had on clone trooper armor with blasters,and there was a hangar bay no horse garage.
Everything was strange. Crafter walked up to them breathing like darth vader through his helmet. “Crafter how did you get all of that?” asked Gameknight amazed “A user named Mr.Star wars.” replied Crafter just then red lazers fired through the village “All troopers to your battle position.” ordered Crafter.
NPC troopers fired through the walls while the pilots stopped the enemy pilots.
To be continued…
Awesomeclash, again, I criticize your grammar mistakes. Below, I have a revised version of this story. If you have Microsoft, open Microsoft Word, type it there, click review then click spellcheck, and fix your mistakes. Now, here is the story…
By Awesomeclash11 and edited by TheRogueCloneX: The Star Wars Mod was added
Awesomeclash11 and Bladeknight23 walked up to the forest and pushed down the two levers to open the iron door. They pulled out their enchanted blades and walked through the newfound forest temple some user built.
Suddenly, there was a thump, thump, thump. “What’s that?” asked Bladeknight23 “I don’t know but it ain’t good.” replied Awesomeclash11. They marched forward to see what had made the noise. They marched to a corner, and when they turned, they saw Gameknight999 mining a piece of iron. “Well hello boys,” said Gameknight999. “Hi,” replied Awesomeclash11. Soon, more users came in the temple. Sneakfour5, ALSkentucky1, and Enders Zheng were among many that burst into the room. “I will allow everyone to stay in this temple,” informed Gameknight.
It wasn’t long until POW!! A huge explosion rattled the room as creepers broke through the cobblestone walls and battle droids with blasters fired at the users. “Who added Star Wars mod?!” asked ALSkentucky1 “Me!” shouted Awesomeclash11 as he pulled his enchanted diamond sword while the other 4 crafted lightsabers. The fight went on as the battle droids were being destroyed.
Soon, all of them were destroyed. “Quick, follow me,” said Gameknight999. The users followed Gameknight to a village with a cobblestone wall around it. “Where are we?” asked ALSkentucky1. “A village,” replied Gameknight999. Just as Gameknight999 opened the door, they were surprised at what the villagers were wearing.
They had on clone trooper armor with blasters, and there was a hangar bay, but no horse stable. Something had happened while they were away. Crafter walked up to them, wheezing like Darth Vader through his sleek, black helmet. “Crafter, how did you get all of that?” asked Gameknight amazed. “A user named Mr_ Star_Wars.” replied Crafter. Then, out of nowhere, red lasers fired through the village “All troopers to your battle position.” ordered Crafter. The NPC got into 6 straight lines. Then, the NPC troopers fired through the walls while the pilots stopped the enemy pilots.
To be continued…
for once this is twice I’m probably not as old as you,but for once can you fix some parts on that story their are some unmaking sense parts. And I wrote it and ever story I wrote on Google docs
I don’t own a microsoft account like maybe you do plus I don’t use windows. I have the complete opposite commputor of yours
So, am I going to post the stories you put in the comments here, or are you going to submit the stories, then I edit them and then resubmit them?
TheRougecloneX you don’t need to do that to the rest of my story I finished it.