CHAPTER 1:Introducing the main characters
I’m walking down through the center of the city with my girlfriend.We turn a corner were, surprise, the school bully and his henchmen are standing there for there after school torment.The bully, Zach, walks up to me and says,“ Well,well,well what do we have here.”I sigh.“Come on ,Zach, do we have to do this right now,” I ask.“ Oh,this isn’t for fun, this beat up has meaning,” he says with a grin.“What did I do to you,” I ask.“Now that I think about it, you stole my girlfriend,”he says angrily.“ COBRA77 didn’t steal me, I left you and went out with him,”she says, getting closer to me in fear.Zach walks up to me, about to punch me, when a machete flies by his fist into the wall next to us.We look over to where it came from to see Jason come out of the shadows, another machete in hand.
Chapter 2: The fight
Jason throws his other machete, closer to me this time. I figure out he’s coming for me.“ SCATTER!” I yell. Right after I said that another machete finds its target in my shoulder.When I realized I had a machete in my shoulder,my knees buckle , and I fall.My girlfriend, VIPER77,sees me fall she runs over to help me up. Wall she’s running to me, a machete gets her in the leg.When I see her fall,anger swells up inside me. I forget in my shoulder and rip the machete out and tossed it aside.My anger makes me realize my ability is putting anger into stregnth. I run, blingly, at Jason, ready for a fight.I look to my left to find my best friend
good job cole i loved your story great job
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Hello cobra77 very good story cole
Thx ManiacMike I like your story also
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you did good all by yourself nice job
I am glad you feel confident about your writing! I wonder what will happen next?
Wow, I’m really impressed!
thx Ian im glad your impressed