A night in the darkness there was a boy whose name
was CC Rider and he was 55. He rode his horse on the
countryside. One day he felt like he was being watched
and he looked behind him and saw a man in black. He
remembered seeing a guy like him named Sonvill and he
was chasing him. Soon CC Rider went into the town hall
and the guy still is fooling him.
Soon CC Rider was in the library and then Sonvill
rode his horse back to his evil lab and he took off his black
helmet and there were really bright lights that shone on his
helmet in the darkness. Then he heard someone coming
but no one was there.
25 years earlier Sonvill was little. He had great
friends and one day when he was in 1st grade CC Rider
came and all of Sonvill’s friends got lost, they played with
CC Rider.
So he moved away and so since then he became
evil.
He has been trying to kill him but at 11:00 he woke
up and he felt something. He wanted to not be evil.
So the next day he went up to CC Rider and asked
him if he wanted to join the dark side with him. Then CC
Rider went and punched him in the nose and then CC
Rider rode away on his horse.
Sonvill was so mad that his lightning struck and
everybody ran and screamed. He took over land Porter.
Then all of the bears,lions,wolves and coyotes took it over
together. But he felt his mom calling to him, “You are
good.”
Then in that moment CC Rider came and said, “Will
you like to join the good side with me? Then we can be
friends forever and we will not take over the world, deal?”
“Ok deal.”
“Let’s go and be good!”
They went to tell everybody that they can come back
into town.
“Look! There is everybody and they are coming.”
CC Rider said, “Sorry for punching you. Really I’m
the bad guy after all.”
Sonvill said, “No I am because I was the one who
took over the town, so no, it is my fault. So let’s ride off.”
So they rode off together.
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