Check out this story from Oliver. It’s called “Farm Boy”
Hi my name is willie and I’m an only child, but I have friends which are not what they seem like My friends are all farm animals. My cow’s names are cupcake and Coby is a girl. My third friend is actually a dog named Duke. She’s young And a fit dog meant...Show it before you need it
There’s a rule in writing, and of course, whenever I say there’s a rule, I’ll think of multiple ways of breaking it, but so far, I’ve never broken this rule, and it goes like this: Rule #10: If your hero needs a gun at the end of the...Here’s Chapter 3 from WonderWriter2000
Chapter Three Leaving The next morning, Gameknight woke up with a start when Harvester ran down the hall screaming, “THEY’RE ON THE MOVE! LETS HIT THE ROAD!”Gameknight jumped up and ran out the door. He found himself in a spruce wood corridor with white...SHOW . . . Don’t Tell!!!
Learning how to show your story to your reader, rather than telling them about it is difficult. I struggle with this in every book I write, because telling is easy and showing is hard. Sometimes, telling is useful to do in your story. I’ve used it to tell the...Protected: SHOW . . . Don’t Tell!!!
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This is a great story by Kiara
Howlers: Morning of the Midnight Chapter 1 Dagger stood there, facing the empty air. He could feel a dark presence following him. “Hello? Anybody there?” SWOOSH! A shadow swirled past him, leaving one paw print. “Huh? A … dog?” Dagger was both confused and...Protected: Not sure what to do – Send them on a JOURNEY!
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