Chapter 1
“Watch out!”NightSwing83735 said as he threw his shield. It got there just before Feyd’s punch and deflected it.”Nnnnnnooooo!”Feyd screamed.NightSwing ducked as an arrow whizzed over his head and hit the enderman.Gameknight999 smiled weakly as NightSwing helped him up.”Thanks, NightSwing.”Gameknight said.”No problem.”He said.”But we got to go.”
Cool! I would love to hear more! Obviously I am a big fan of putting ones self in the story, except me in my story is literally nothing like me. Anyway this is good! I want to hear more! Feyd+Xa-Tul have always been super interesting to me.
Thanks! I have been trying to write more about this.
I like it, but I never understood why it has to be split up into different chapters in different posts. Is it because the author didn’t want to go through the trouble of making an entire story at the same time, cuz that’s understandable.